Mmm. One closer to one's own making, but I take the point all the same.
[It's a so very on the nose story.
They're as comfortable as this ritual ever allows for, the vampire staring up at Sypha knowing that she can read all his emotions that aren't showing. The fear, the anxiety, the ever-present possessiveness that has now been amplified, and the longing for this to just all be done. It's built on the foundation of love for them both, something that perhaps should have cracked for their safety but didn't.]
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[It's a so very on the nose story.
They're as comfortable as this ritual ever allows for, the vampire staring up at Sypha knowing that she can read all his emotions that aren't showing. The fear, the anxiety, the ever-present possessiveness that has now been amplified, and the longing for this to just all be done. It's built on the foundation of love for them both, something that perhaps should have cracked for their safety but didn't.]
May I please make a request?